The Story Behind the Story

“The Farmer’s Boy and The Southern Princess” originally saw light as a Christmas gift to my wife.  Years ago my family instituted a “homemade gift policy” as a way to fight how exorbitant our Christmases had become.  Essentially, we replaced big spending with big stress and lots of last minute sewing, cooking, and leatherworking.  Yes, leatherworking.  We’re that handy.  At least, the rest of my family is.  With no craft skills beyond the ability to cook a delicious cream of tomato soup (Merry Christmas!  Here’s some soup!) I resolved to use the one skill which I did have, writing.

My wife Victoria is from Uruguay.  That’s practically as southern as you can get without hitting ice, and the name of the story popped into my head early on.  Anyone who’s laid eyes on her wouldn’t argue with the princess part of it, either.  She’s, simply put, dazzlingly beautiful, and carries herself with the kind of grace that is normally reserved for royalty.  I’m from Texas and the Midwest, and while I’m no farmer, it often feels like I’m staring into the light of the sun when I look at her, which is as often as I can.  It is humbling, wonderfully so, and I thought the initially cow-eyed character of the farmer’s boy captured this emotion well.   The rich/poor, royal/common dichotomy is a common one in fairie tales, and I sought to evoke that mood as well.  The title stuck, and all that was lacking was a story to carry it.

The first draft of the story came quickly.  I think I finished the story Victoria would read on Christmas morning in only one or two days.  That’s remarkably fast for me.  I knew I wanted the story to be about warmth, and innocence, and sacrifice, all themes I associate with my wife.  I also knew that I wanted their love to be legendary, a trait which could easily move into the trite if it wasn’t handled carefully.  I thought some narrative distance might help with this, and thus was born the character of the Grandfather telling his grandson about this epic love story from long ago.

Nothing’s free in this world, or any other I presume, and so like any great love, the Farmer’s Boy had to work for it.  His perseverance and certainty as he waits for the Princess each year might possibly have a real-world analog in my own courting of Victoria, but you didn’t hear it here.  When it came time to publish, I recognized that the story lacked an antagonist against which the lovers could unite.  The Astronomer walked onto the page one morning as I struggled with this problem and dared me to write him out of the story.  I could not.  He was too much fun to write, and I had to admit that his heart was in the right place.

I’m proud of this story, and I hope you enjoy it.  Ultimately though, this is the one story I’ve written where your reaction, gentle reader, means the least to me.  This was my gift to the woman I love.  A gift that, I hope, was fit for a princess, and a love that, I know, is legendary.

C. Mitchell O’Neal
Winter 2007 - Ann Arbor

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